When I associated both together (lines+Adrian) I noticed that the colours didn't really work together, I so try other colours for Adrian's clothes.
At this state I am not please with the overall design, for me something miss but I don't really know what. I asked friends and I realised what I would like is to show it's a comic book. Indeed, nothing really show that at this moment. So I worked on the Adrian's face to give him a 'funny' face.
He now looks at the reader, it can be a way to involved the reader.
The reader's eye is now catch by his big eyes, it also shows how worry is Adrian.



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